MEDICINE PERSONAL STATEMENT EDITING

Making Every Sentence Count

Writing the personal statement is a daunting task and let's face it - we're not all born authors like J.K. Rowling. Where do I start? Does this sound too cheesy? Are there enough buzz words? Maybe you just need a fresh pair of eyes to look at your application. Our expert tutors at MediTutor are here to help, get your statement marked and edited by our experts.

SIX GOLDEN RULES

Our experts recommend these top tips

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THE OPENING PARAGRAPH

The admissions team read through thousands of personal statements, you MUST stand out. They want to see why you want to become a doctor and what motivates you - generic reasons are an absolute no.

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TO BE SCIENCY OR NOT TO BE

A common question asked by hundreds of applicants every year. Personal statements with a large emphasis on science are attractive to instituitions such as  Oxbridge and Imperial. Always keep in mind the qualities and traits medical schools are looking for.

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TEAM WORK, LEADERSHIP, EMPATHY, PASSION, KIND

All too often, students send us personal statements with a list of work experience or a list of adjectives describing themselves. Limit your long lists to a few points, provide supporting evidence and focus on reflection. Quality is always better than quantity.

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DON'T FORGET THE REALITIES OF MEDICINE

From long waiting times to see a consultant to patients lining the corridor of A&E. The admissions team want to see that you appreciate the realities of working in Medicine and understand what some of the difficulties medics on the front line face.

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IS ALL OF YOU'RE SPELLING & GRAMMAR CORRECT?

Just how you noticed our grammatical mistake above - make sure you double and triple check your statement before the final submission. One of the most common faults we see are the incorrect use of commas.

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THE GOLDEN CONCLUSION

Conclude as strongly as you started. End your personal statement on a strong note by stating the key personal attributes that you believe makes you well-suited to a vocational career like Medicine. When the admissions team have tired eyes, your conclusion may be the focus of their attention.

£35

1 x Edit

£100

5 x Edits

£190

10 x Edits